#1
One of my songs 'Storming the Ice Throne' Please comment

I followed a star that came from the sky
Repent for the end is nigh!
Carry on through darkness
Carry on through the rain
When the sun and moon align with the memories of the slain
Across seas of blood we ride forevermore
Heathen this means war!

Run through the forest and beyond the trees
Run beyond river, run beyond seas

[bridge]


I ride for the throne all through the night
Shadowed only by eagles in flight
I’m here to take your throne
I’ll take off your head before taking your crown
Storming the ice throne
Evil let my name be known!
It shall echo through the valleys of pain
Evil be thy name!

[extended bridge]


I followed a star that came from the sky
Repent for the end is nigh!
Carry on through darkness
Carry on through the rain
When the sun and moon align with the memories of the slain
Across seas of blood we ride forevermore
Heathen this means war!

Please comment!
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
Last edited by Bal_Sagoth at Feb 14, 2007,
#2
Aww come on, someone please comment!
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#3
You've been told recently about bumping, try giving out some decent crits first, asking others to return the favour. I've checked you give out squat, minus a few useless one line comments. Warning, and I believe ban.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.