#1
count the death tolls count the lives, lost to ignorant lies
break the news to their loving wives
hear the begging hear the cries, of helpless young and old
shoot your guns and throw your knives
consequential lives of men, innocence doesn't matter
bad luck takes them in the end

hey
wish it away
wish it away
nobody really wants all of this
fatal inter-collateral entity

mr. ex-con's got a gun, he's not afraid to use it
one more jon doe on the run
wannabe robbers doing time, or driving recklessly away
head on death collision fines
battles faught and battles won, is it worth it in the end?
constant unforgiving crimes

hey
take me away
take me away
gonna die anyway aren't I?
fatal inter-collateral enemies

hey
wish it away
wish it away
nobody really wants all of this
fatal inter-collateral entity
#2
Quote by BillyGates
count the death tolls count the lives, lost to ignorant lies
break the news to their loving wives
hear the begging hear the cries, of helpless young and old
shoot your guns and throw your knives
consequential lives of men, innocence doesn't matter
bad luck takes them in the end


Too Long, Doesn't really make it flow, other than that, very good.

hey
wish it away
wish it away
nobody really wants all of this
fatal inter-collateral entity

Good

mr. ex-con's got a gun, he's not afraid to use it
one more jon doe on the run
wannabe robbers doing time, or driving recklessly away
head on death collision fines
battles faught and battles won, is it worth it in the end?
constant unforgiving crimes

Very Good

hey
take me away
take me away
gonna die anyway aren't I?
fatal inter-collateral enemies

Good

hey
wish it away
wish it away
nobody really wants all of this
fatal inter-collateral entity

Good



Very good lyrics overall. Well written, and catchy.


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