#1
well my friend wrote this and he wants to know if its any good, im not very good at rating lyrics so ill let u do it


Hate U

I dont know why i feel so much hate everyday
Ur the one embarresing urself anyway
I think i must be ****in insane
cus everytime i see u it makes my sunny day rain

Why is it so hard for u to stop?
Everytime u start my sense of right and wrong get lost
I dont know what to do
my stomach is telling me no
but my mind is saying kill u

(i guess this is supposed to be an interlude part or someting??)

idono what it is that u say
i dont know what it is u do
all i know is that ur gonna be dead
cus im not sharing this ****ing world with u!


thats it, i think hes talking about the people that make fun of him
#3
You should change the following:

I dont know what to do
my stomach is telling me no
but my mind is saying kill u

to

I dont know what to do
my head is telling me no
but my heart is saying kill u
#4


Seriously, just tell your friend he needs to get off Korn's dick and start writing in his own style. Or at least worship better songwriters.
#5
Quote by MastaBassist10


Seriously, just tell your friend he needs to get off Korn's dick and start writing in his own style. Or at least worship better songwriters.


lol, i figured someone would say that sometime, u know whats funny is when he gave it to me, he was like "yea, when i read it was like shit, everyones gonna think im trying to copy off corey taylor"
Last edited by F-ing Hostile at Feb 14, 2007,