#1
Fun song... we wrote it about a GTA misssion

the first solo is pretty early...

second solo is around 4:00 or soo mabey a little later

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#2
Got a link?

Here's one of mine- https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=525258

Edit-Okay, I see it now.

Edit 2- Whoa, that was recorded in a basement??? Awesome quality, man.
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#3
The intro drags on for way too long.

The reggae-feel guitar in the verse has timing issues.

I really like how the distortion comes back in.

Good solos.


I don't like the double time part very much at all, I think it starts to fall apart during it.

Vocals were good and I love the fact that the song is about a Grand Theft Auto mission, very unique.

Good work!

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#6
Hey man I listened to your 4th song about The Reality of TV Dinners...
Oh man I LOLed so hard at the intro...did you make that, or is it a sound byte....its awesome!!!
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#7
this song is good. It has a catchy melody and the reggae part is cool. I'm in the process of listening to it right now. The solos are pretty cool, too. I think you should tighten up some of the timing in the reggae part as stated before, but the song is really cool and the lyrics are funny. Good job. Keep it up. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091