#1
NO X IN HARDCORE, NO X IN HARDCORE(chorus)

You Bastards think you know your roots
of converse shoes and steel toed boots
and Cirlcle Jerks and Black Flag Well,
This New genre shames them all to hell

(chorus)
Original this fad may seem
but frankly it is quite mainstreem
You think Your heart is filled with pain
but blue blood still flows through your veins

(chorus)

You know that you just want to see
your favorite bands on MTV
Mass Media, It controls you
why the **** you like Atreyu?

(chorus)

You're psuedo emo psuedo pop
can't just pick one and ****ing stop
you die your hair with Blue Green Streaks
In two years You'll all be Jesus Freaks

(chorus)

Note: this song is meant to be SCREAMED over a lightning fast guitar riff with punding drums and bass
#2
its ok lyriclly but as far as song structure id take one of those chorus out.
#3
Haha its pretty funny.

Me and my friend did something like this only we remade Ballroom Blitz into a song called Hardcore Dance and we completely ripped on scene kids.
#6
Quote by Adam_Harrison9
I like it lol but it quite makes me wonder, do you like hardcore and are just pissing about? Or generally taking the piss? :|

idk there are a lot of posers in my town and it kinda pisses me off. I wrote this while a rich white wannabe was being a douche bag. he was all like "I, am a guitar god. Our songs are much higher quality than anybody in this town" instead of wasting my energy on yelling at him i just wrote this down ill agree with the previos poster, the chorus sucks but it would sound allright screamed over a "nazi Punks **** Off' type of riff.
#9
NO X ftw.

Loved every line of it. Especially the part about Atreyu. I have never actually listened to them and everyone at my school thinks theyre hardcore because they listen to them. funny. lol.


I agree with this man.

I am in a 'hardcore' band.. well its 'death metal' but still. And i'd love to do a song like this its sweet haha.

I agree with the screaming and the fast guitar and drums too.
#10
I though it was good,
Intill you threw in that desription,
"SCREAMED over a lightninh fast riff"
Makes me wonder how it will so,
Cuz that seems like opposite of the song.
So i hope you mean like,
Cirle Jerks - Bad Brains scream.
If you do, that rock on.
CTHC
#11
Quote by Alix_D
Hehe, it's true and the lyrics are pretty good, i'd much rather like to hear it actually played, would sound lovely.



is it relly supposed to sound lovely? anyway dude i love it. makes me laff and thnk of losers i know.
#12
This makes me laugh. A lot.

Especially the little note at the end about the SCREAMING it really loud.

This is great. Not, you know, poetically great, but still frickin awesome.


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#13
Quote by Alix_D
Hehe, it's true and the lyrics are pretty good, i'd much rather like to hear it actually played, would sound lovely.

I like old school hardcore like black flag and circle jerks. Its the new definition of harcore which is this emo crap that i hate.
#14
Quote by BreakingTheGirl
I though it was good,
Intill you threw in that desription,
"SCREAMED over a lightninh fast riff"
Makes me wonder how it will so,
Cuz that seems like opposite of the song.
So i hope you mean like,
Cirle Jerks - Bad Brains scream.
If you do, that rock on.

It sounds a lot like "Nazi Punks **** Off" by the dead kennedys