#2
I liked it.
but at the end of the first verse the drums should come in.
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#3
i liked it alot man, definately could see it being real interesting if recorded in good quality...nice style, not unlike my own. good looks dude.
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#4
Yeah I like your sound. The vocals are quite good. The one little guitar part could be turned down a bit though in the chorus. at least it sounds really loud in headphones. You should add some bass to this I think it would make it sound much better. overall great job though I like the guitar and the vocals. and thanks for the crit.
#5
It sounds great, chorus could do some work, timing. Have you tried mixing?

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#7
It's actually pretty good for a first recording!

The drums sound very artificial and should be quite a bit louder, the guitar should be a tad louder aswell. Vox are well done, sort of monotonous but I guess that's the way stonerrock has to be. ;-)

I like the solo-tone with that effect (was it phaser?). Good job, keep 'em coming m8!

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#8
sounds really good. i like you're vocals. the guitar is a little boring, but not actually annoying, just kind of not so great. i think some bass would be good. i like your drum loop

thanks for the crit.
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#10
very nice and interesting, some timing and volume issues , vocals were good, pretty good keep it up


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#11
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#12
nope sry i thought this was texas db songs, and there is a chicks voice.
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#13
Thanks for the comments because after I read them I saw that I had a different timing going into the chorus almost every time, so I'll get to fixing that. And ya, I know the guitar isnt great but my skills are limited, I've only been playing for about a year.
#14
I've got to say that this is a very good recording. Probably my favorite on UG. You do a great job singing, very reminisent of QOTSA. The only thing that could be better would be less repetitive drums, but i'd love to hear more songs like this.
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#15
i think its actually decently catchy. the vocals came through pretty well. you have a cool voice.

i think that this would be better if you mixed it a little better. i do all my songs in garageband too, and with a little tweaking they can come out decently polished.

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#16
I like it! It's got a grungey feel but it's unique too. Your vocals sound sort of like a young Jim Morrison.
#17
Thanks for the comments on my tunes.

I like the song man, but i agree with a few people about the chorus. That's supposed to be the high point of the song and I think it could use a little work and be a bit more catchy.

Good work though!
#18
The lead guitar part doesn't fit that well, and I think the tone could be a little better. I really like the vocals a lot, though. The drums are a little repetitive, as has been said. I think the vocals are the best part of this song, so good job with that. Keep it up. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
#19
Pretty sick man, sounds like Deftones alittle. I think you should try putting some more effects on your voice (delay, reverb), and smooth out ur guitars alittle bit more. But overall I like it, and think your voice is pretty good. Check out my song http://www.myspace.com/seandemos
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#20
I liked the vocals and the song overall, but i hated the guitar tone.
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#21
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Pretty sick man, sounds like Deftones alittle. I think you should try putting some more effects on your voice (delay, reverb), and smooth out ur guitars alittle bit more. But overall I like it, and think your voice is pretty good. Check out my song http://www.myspace.com/seandemos


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