Poll: CooOOOookie Crisp?
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Sun Bears Pre-Quills [Spine 3 of 9]
11 92%
Oh how fast things can change
1 8%
Voters: 12.
#1
Sun Bears Pre-Quills [Spine 3 of 9]
What if the spindles and threads that
Made up our dove-print pillows and stain-glass beds [Sorry]
Didn’t stop each time they finished sewing a contemporary beauty. [But]
String me up with braids and web and your arms—
Well then, we might sit next to each other perpetually rocking, [Do]
If we’re quiet then the willows and robins won’t glimpse us—
Well then, String me up before I fall this far and melt into the carpet,
String me up with legs and your neck and your arms—
What if the spindles and threads that [know]
Make up our crow-print pillows and stain-glass beds [you?]
Didn’t stop each time they finished sewing a contemporary us. [Do]
String me up with your gasp and your chest and your arms—
Well then, we might just figure out that we need each other
To keep our bodies shivering and to keep our clothes so innocently pretty. [Really?]



Oh how fast things can change
In the time of 1 sunset
The tide has gone out
As far as my eyes will allow me to see

We shared the shore
Just after sunrise
There was nothing as beautiful
As before daybreak
I will try to hold this
But it’s already starting to fade

But just at my eyes end
Her boat sits
Can she sleep with the shaking?
Or has the day swept her in to sheets
With the strain of the day to rest away

But as for me I shall stay and wait
That’s all I can do
There is only so much land to dock
One day they will have to return
#4
Hard choice, I like the first one, but I find the second one more relatable, I'm going with sun bear because overall I think it's a better piece.