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This is a song I helped Percy Nobby Norton write while he was still in Experimental Rock, he is now in Post Experimental Rock (the 2nd Wave). It was like all of his works perfect for the experimental rock genre (with emphasis heavily on experimental).

Here is what he had to say about the song "This song is an angry peice of work, with a distinctive Detroit sound. I was driving around Detroit at 3:00am and I was angry as I had not had a partner in the last hour. I saw a nice gentleman, and forced my love on him. This song is based on those events. "

(Buy The Album)
You got blood
On your hands now
You rip me up one
I take you out

Don't you love me
Don't you love me
Well I love you
Well I love you

I'll launch a rear guard attack
No matter what you say
It will be an offensive
And you'll have nothing to say

Bend Over
Bend Over
For Me
For Me

Bend Over
Bend Over
For Me
For Me

I love you
Now you love me
Physically Physically

Thank You Very Much
Ben Pazolli
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"The nicest guy you'll ever f............ind"
#2
Hm. Its not bad. I liked the part about the rear guard attack except you rhymed say with say. The last part was good too. It makes me think of a prostitute to be honest.

Good job. I like it.

Could you critique mine?

'sans serif' in my signature.