Glenn4009
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Join date: Sep 2006
39 IQ
#1
Hi Guys, was wondering if i could get your oppinions on this, its the first song or tab i've ever posted on here I just wrote it today. Still needs a little work done but this is the first/rough version. Thanks Guys
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Flatline.zip
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duncang
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Join date: Sep 2005
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#2
The first notes of bars 5-12 sound VERY dissonant. I suppose that's what you were going for?

Either way, I don't really like that much.

The riffs and melodies are pretty great, although it seems almost all of the song is that similar melody, and it gets a little dull since the repetition of a similar idea goes on for a while. Another small thing is the use of the Crash Cymbal 2 sound in the chorus, nothing awful, just that sound bugs me.

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Glenn4009
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Join date: Sep 2006
39 IQ
#3
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated mate I'll take the advice onboard for future songs .
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"Wait , stop! I need to get my fight music on! ... wait.... one sec....yep thats it, we're good to go"


If it has a good body, a nice long neck and 6 strings i'd hit it like Ron Jeremy on viagra.
Pieceofmind019
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Join date: Feb 2006
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#4
The intro was cool it just seemed to kinda have to much stuff going on that didnt need to be going on (I dont know if that makes any sence but thats the best i can describe it as). The riffs were good but the just kinda seemed to be veriations upon themselfs but alot of bands were made famouse for that very concept so I dont know

Over all it was good but not great it needs some work and some veriations in the riffs 6/10