#1
This is the first song i've ever written with vocals.

I recorded it live, guitar and vocals together.

I understand that the lyrics are hard to make out, especially as I ran out of breath on one of the verses (!), i'll re-record it soon, just want to get a response from people on my songwriting.

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#2
amazing john mayer in the making!!!!

can u plz send me the tab of Heartbeats. nice tune
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#3
wow love the acoustic very beautiful and the vocals r really good for recording while playin guitar and singin, i could kinda understand the lyrics and they were pretty good. went with the song well.i would like to hear more from u, keep it up


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#4
I like this song a lot. The vocals sound cool with that kind of natural reverb. Very mellow and relaxing. This song relaxes me which is always good. I listened to your other songs, too, and the all sound good. I like the ocean one. The guitar part on that is very cool. If you added electric guitar echoey/delayed/ambient leads in your songs it might sound really cool. Just really, really background with spacey effects and tons of reverb so they sound really far awayish. I like all your songs, though. Check mine out, too. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
#5
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can u plz send me the tab of Heartbeats. nice tune


Heartbeats is not by me, it's buy an artist called Jose Gonzalez, a band called the Knife originally wrote it.

Thanks everyone for your comments, they're really warming. I'll get round to critting yours when i'm back home

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#6
Awesome guitar work, good voice. And good coordination - singing and playing at the same time is near impossible, at least to me :-D

There is some fret-buzz but that's probably hard to get rid off. Keep 'em coming!