#2
Guitar was alright.

But vocals were not. Out of key most of the time. You may be trying too hard to make it sound like TBS, but try focusing more on hitting the right notes and the warmth of the vocals should come.
#4
hey thanks for the crit, i dont know if you heard the vocals part or the non vocals one.


but, i havent heard this song, but i am familiar with tbs.

anyways, the guitar is pretty good.

singing is a little shaky, but i cant sing very well so who am i to speak. i do think they were a little low.


but good job.
#5
guitars played wrong
the Acoustic is played differnt at some parts
and vocals are alittle alright
good job tho
#6
Quote by welcomeHome565
guitars played wrong
the Acoustic is played differnt at some parts
and vocals are alittle alright
good job tho


Yeah...because when you cover a song, you HAVE to play it the exact same way it has been done before?


As for the guitar, I thought it was okay, got repetitive, but hey. Singing isn't half bad, I've seen people do way worse, honestly. Keep working on your vocals and you'll eventually get it.

good job on that.
#7
Hey thanks for the replies everyone

I realise the guitar is different, I just kinda made my own version for one guitar. And yeah the vocals aren't great but I figure the only way to improve is to practice!

Although when I listen back to it now the vocals seem to sound a lot worse than they did just after I recorded it