#1


Im stuck here in the middle
Im stuck here in the middle

Im stuck in the middle of a sand storm

Im stuck in the middle
****ing with the common wealth

Im stuck here in the middle,
Crying out for help

Im stuck here in the middle
Trying to kill some time,
Im stuck here in the middle untill i can take flight

Im stuck here in a little
Im stuck here in a little town

trying to hold my ground
in a sandstorm

Im stuck here in the middle of a sandstorm

****ing with the common wealth
****ing with the common wealth
****ing with the common wealth
****ing with the common wealth
****ing with the common wealth

In a sandstorm

(Slow, calm)

Why?

Cant we lift off,

Why?

must I get a little drunk?

When,

Will the storm pass?

Will it pass soon?

WHY?

will the storm end soon?

Will it end?

Will it stop?

Will it end?

Will it?

(GROW HEAVY)

Im stuck here in the middle

Im stuck here in a little

Im stuck here in the middle of a sandstorm

****ing with the common wealth
****ing with the common wealth
****ing with the common wealth
****ing with the common wealth

In the sandstorm.....

(play out)
:stickpoke
#3
What's there is good, but it seems sorta as though you came up with only a few lines and then repeated them a lot. Speaking of which, you could do with more structure.
#5
Oh right ok. That sucks. It's happened to me before. But now I just have a pad where I write random lyrics. (Finished things go on my computer.) I'd recommend you do the same thing. It's helpful. And sometimes if you just come up with a couple of lines they're helpful later on so you can just scribble them down.