pete07
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2007
395 IQ
#2
Hmm, i liked it, still a very original and challenging piece but for some reason i think it lacked some of the brutality and expertise of the other DM songs youve posted on here. The solos are still brilliant, the drumwork tight and varied and the chord choice very interesting and atmospheric. I can see this working very well as perhaps an instrumental piece rather then with vocals (not sure if that was your intent when writing it but i just thought i'd mention it). Overall i'll give it a 9/10, possibly a 10 if it maybe had a tempo change and some speedier riffs here and there.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=526292
saddam
Carcass
Join date: Apr 2003
1,808 IQ
#3
thx man, i was also thinking of making it an instrumental. I know it's not brutal or anything, but I wasn't going for that at all with this one...
Pieceofmind019
Krisiun Freak
Join date: Feb 2006
233 IQ
#4
Ummm... It wasnt near as good as the other stuff youve posted it sounded more like metalcore jazz kinda stuff to me which i really dont like, although i did really like some of the harmony and bars 44-51, and the solos are stiff perfect.

Overall i didnt really care for it 6/10
ewanmac
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2006
56 IQ
#5
nice man. crazy jazzy chords its pretty damn hard to play. reminds me of arch enemy crossed with messuggah crossed with cryptopsy something like that. good job
ch715dallat
BTBAM=Godly
Join date: Jun 2006
3,466 IQ
#6
it was good on teh lead parts very good in fact, i really liked them but the riffs from 58 o 73 sounded really random and jumbled, but then once the lead picked up again it was good and i really liked the last set of riffs,
those were some crazy chords overall a pretty damn solid piece, :thumbs:
HumanitysDeath
UG Board King
Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#7
This definitely sounds like an instrumental piece.
Keeping that in mind, it sounds really good.
I didn't like the intro drums. The awkward rhythm wasn't very pleasing.
Everything else sounding pretty damn good.
The dissonant chords worked really well. And, as always, your lead is ****ing amazing.
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Spark1284
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2004
244 IQ
#8
whatever happening to posting these as powertabs?? anyhoo i loved it, like u said its not incredible brutal but its got alot of strength, it would be great as an instrumental. wonderful solo i wouldnt change a thing. i love the tritone to major chords i thought they were perfect. Overall this is just great, and very original... with alot of tech metal bands they start to sound the same but ur melodies totally break from that. stellar
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guitar guy 6006
My name is Lee
Join date: Oct 2004
645 IQ
#9
i liked how the beginning had a lot of energy and stuff, definitely not my style of music but still awesome sounding nonetheless, i like it and i usually dont like metal-y kind of music its cool 9/10
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ouchies
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Join date: Jan 2006
1,613 IQ
#10
It wasn't as powerful as your other songs. The leads were good, but not enough to make the song.

The harmonizing of the first lead part is sweet by the way.