guitar guy 6006
My name is Lee
Join date: Oct 2004
645 IQ
#1
tell me what you think of my newest song


suggestions...?

crit for crit...?

listen to the whole thing there is a lot of diversity through it...!


this is my song that i am most proud of please dont steal it.. i will know
Attachments:
check it yo.zip
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HumanitysDeath
UG Board King
Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#2
*steals*
Teehee. Just kidding, of course.

That entire thing was really awesome. I loved the whole thing. I want to see you and your band live now. That intro was really awesome. And the bass made it all the better. The dynamics on the rhythm guitar starting at bar 30 were superb, they really made that part sound amazing.

I don't like the random scale playing at bar 17. Seems. I dunno. You just could've transitioned that a lot better.

But I do love that piano. That sounds really great with everything else.

Love it, man!


Care to crit mine? There's a link in the sig.
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guitar guy 6006
My name is Lee
Join date: Oct 2004
645 IQ
#3
oh and im only fourteen years old, is this good songwriting ability for a fourteen yr old?


i wrote the whole thing by myself
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Last edited by guitar guy 6006 at Feb 16, 2007,
Ryioku
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jul 2006
1,294 IQ
#4
Age isnt a factor... its just a bout how well you can do what you do. And while the genre of music isnt my preferred genre... it was very well made, and i applaud you.

Crit Mine?

Its on the firs tpage... "Woven by Nightfall"
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Reverb X
Soul Prospect
Join date: Dec 2003
284 IQ
#5
I dont have powertab, so i cant listen to it. Check out my song in my sig.
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MadMudgeN
Lets do this I'm a cashew
Join date: Sep 2003
1,716 IQ
#6
That was quite the cool piece. I liked it a whole lot, except for the end. I didn't get the cadence I wanted. If it's not a perfect cadence, I'd fix it so it is, but other than that, I think that's quite excellent. 9.5/10... crit mine please? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=524060
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guitar guy 6006
My name is Lee
Join date: Oct 2004
645 IQ
#8
now i uploaded it with midi so people without powertab can listen i guess.
Attachments:
lee howard.zip
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jazkel24
UG Newbie
Join date: Sep 2005
440 IQ
#9
man. i hate midi...

naw. but your song sounds good. i just hate the way my comp speakers portray it. its kinda tinny. good work though./
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cool#9
next satriani
Join date: Feb 2006
309 IQ
#10
Pretty cool, pretty cool.
Only bad comment i have is the dissonence, i know its intentional, but this song doesn't have the right mood to pull off dissonence.
Other then that, two thumbs up, three if i could.