The Powerslave
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2005
307 IQ
#1
Well its my first attempt at something that isnt just 2 guitars, bass and drums, so see what you think. The changes from the major bit to the minor bit and back again are a bit rough (the Change section), so if anyone has any suggestions for making that better I'd be grateful. I'd also like to know whether any sort of percussion should be included. I'll change to a MIDI or GP4 if anyone really wants it as well. If you want a crit for crit just leave a link or something in your post. Thanks.

Edit: Forgot the attachment.
Attachments:
FF Thing.zip
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Last edited by The Powerslave at Feb 16, 2007,
Metallica708
UG Fanatic
Join date: Oct 2005
659 IQ
#3
There isn't anything in your post...

>.<

Met-edit... Metalli-edit? Metal-Edit?

EDIT:

I liked it. I can imagine it in the credits of a final fantasy game.

Like you said, the changing bit is a little clunky... Maybe add in a few bars in-between, just to make the change smoother. The actual 'change' section is great though.
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Last edited by Metallica708 at Feb 16, 2007,
gallagher2006
UG Addict
Join date: Mar 2006
5,854 IQ
#6
It was quite good, but at the same time just a complete rip off of Aeriths theme and the prelude as well as the Lunatic Pandora thing from FF8, but all mashed together

Sorry man can't say I really enjoyed it, but one bad crit out of 4 ain't bad eh?
piratepirate
shiver me timbers
Join date: Jun 2005
153 IQ
#7
It was beautiful, but yeah like they've said, it did blatantly rip off a lot of FF themes rather than just being FF-esque. But well composed, I'll give you that.
The Powerslave
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2005
307 IQ
#8
Yeah it is evident that I used a lot of Nobuo stuff, although I tried to make sure i didnt actually rip anything off completely, only used liberally. Nothing should be a direct copy I dont think.
"Their fate is in each others hands as they decide whether to share... or to shaft"
Robert Kilroy-Silk from his sadly shortlived quiz-show Shafted.

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