#1
Verse 1
Block the walls
cover the windows
set up the barricade
your mind will soon fall
drop the weapons
raise the hands
to your knees
blood on the floor
eyes begin to bleed
Chorus
The shadow on the walls
drop your guard and then you fall
duck under the chop of bullets
stand up for the second wave, you blew it
drip from the celing panels
stuffed and gagged, driping bloody channels
Verse 2
Run through the door
breath catchs in your throat
stop for a break
bullets drop you to the floor
you cry slow tears
your "friend" stands over you
black hearted, black shotgun
3 shots and your a wide smear
Chorus
Bridge
Can you feel it?
Runnin through your mind
Can you feel it?
Your friends are one of a kind
Can you feel it?
the last second alive
Can you feel it?
your hearts gives its final drive
Can you feel it?
Chorus
Outro
Block the walls
cover the windows
set up the barricade
your mind will soon fall
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#2
huh? what happens? you told nothing of what it's about, or what genre you're aiming for or what........elaborate please.
when im with you, there's nothing I wouldn't do, i just wanna be you're only one. im gasping out of straws, taken aback by what i saw that night before when we were all alone...
#3
I dont normally tell people what the songs aiming for. I was basically just venting because i was rather pissed a minute ago, and so i wrote this
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#4
oh. well when your emotions are high, its time to write them down.
when im with you, there's nothing I wouldn't do, i just wanna be you're only one. im gasping out of straws, taken aback by what i saw that night before when we were all alone...
#5
It makes me think of a shootout in an action film. I quite like the straight-up approach, with slightly obvious metaphors, it suits the song. Made me think of an angry metal/grunge sound, but, as plus182 said, what were you going for?
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