Hey everyone.

I've always though this song rocked and I've been wanting to do an acoustic version of it so I sat down tonight and came up with this. It's still kind of rough in areas and the quiet little solo is pretty bad, so I'm going to keep working at that.

If anyone likes the song and is interested in singing vocals, that would be cool. I can export another track with the melody line taken out.


I'll return any critiques.

I think it is a little slow. This is a very good idea, and I think it could be made very cool, but I think you should speed it up just a little if you are planning on adding vox because if you sing the song along with your version it seems kind of slow. Your version is really cool, and it's played very well. I think it would be great to add vocals to, but I don't want to do it. Good luck finding someone, and when you do, post the complete version because I would love to hear it. Thanks, and please crit my music if you want here. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
Yeah, you should speed it up. But it was a very good idea and I liked it. As you said it's a bit rough in some areas. Make it feel more... emotional in some areas, to give it that rock feeling. And in some places the timing was slightly off. But it was very nice, otherwise...

Crit mine?