#1
Just some lyrics I wrote in the early hours of this morning.Nothing special. Open to interpretation.

you're guilty as sin
you know where you've been
the house of excuses
spiral staircase of lies
the battle field of emotion
each of us despise

behind the eyes
of your perfect disguise
a fortress of thoughts
too thick too breach
a highway of opinions
the end we cant reach

apologies, then lies
making compromise
human herosy
for all to see

the human mind
a curious find
tool of the human race
but one thing mislayed
a slip of the tounge
they'll be hell to pay


These are the first lyrics I've written in years so i'm a lil rusty.
#2
you're guilty as sin
you know where you've been
the house of excuses
spiral staircase of lies
the battle field of emotion
each of us despise
i think the last line needs a bit more info,like 'is what each of us despise' or sumthin

behind the eyes
of your perfect disguise
a fortress of thoughts
too thick too breach
a highway of opinions
the end we cant reach

apologies, then lies
making compromise
human herosy
for all to see
i think the last 2 lines are to short, and try maknig this verse a bit more longer

the human mind
a curious find
tool of the human race
but one thing mislayed
a slip of the tounge
they'll be hell to pay

very good, thier good lyrics even tho they are a bit simple, which theres nothing wrong with.its good to see simple lyrics that are good. not much i cant find wrong with it, except the verse that i said make it longer, that 1 i didnt really like that much. crit 'upon the unknown' if u could