#1
well, the lyrics r very girly, because my bassist made them up and well, shes a girl so, what do you think?


It's not so easy loving me
It gets so complicated
All the things you've gotta be
Everything's changin
But you're the truth
I'm amazed by all your patience
Everything I put you through


When I'm about to fall
Somehow you're always waitin
with your open arms to catch me
You're gonna save me from myself
from myself
You're gonna save me from myself

that last line is screamed

My love is tainted by your touch
Because some have shown me aces
But you've got that royal flush
I know it's crazy everyday
Well tomorrow may be shaky
But you never turn away


Don't ask me why I'm cryin
Cuz when I start to crumble
You know how to keep me smilin'
You always save me from myself
from myself, myself
You're gonna save me from myself

last line is screamed

I know it's hard, it's hard
But you've broken all my walls
You've been my strength, so strong

'So strong' is screamed

And don't ask me why I love you
It's obvious your tenderness
Is what I need to make me
a better person to myself
to myself, myself
You're gonna save me from myself

last line is screamed
#3
It's not so easy loving me
It gets so complicated
All the things you've gotta be
Everything's changin
But you're the truth
I'm amazed by all your patience
Everything I put you through
good first verse

When I'm about to fall
Somehow you're always waitin
with your open arms to catch me
You're gonna save me from myself
from myself
You're gonna save me from myself
i would cut out the second 'from myself' ( one inbetween the last 2 lines)

that last line is screamed

My love is tainted by your touch
Because some have shown me aces
But you've got that royal flush
I know it's crazy everyday
Well tomorrow may be shaky
But you never turn away


Don't ask me why I'm cryin
Cuz when I start to crumble
You know how to keep me smilin'
You always save me from myself
from myself, myself
You're gonna save me from myself
not to sure about the repeating of 'myself' so many times, but it doesnt matter
last line is screamed

I know it's hard, it's hard
But you've broken all my walls
You've been my strength, so strong

'So strong' is screamed

And don't ask me why I love you
It's obvious your tenderness
Is what I need to make me
a better person to myself
to myself, myself
You're gonna save me from myself

last line is screamed

hm, pretty good. their not too girly, i think it could still work in a screamo band, nothing really wrong with it, but repeating the 'from myself' did get a little annoying to me, but hey, thats just me. crit 'upon the unknown' if u could