USCENDONE BENE
I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
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#1
This is a song that i have written recently, so changes will probably be made. I cut out most of the end solo because a lot of it sucked, but the rest of the song sounds good. I tried to make the bass a little more interesting, so tell me what you think

I am happy to crit your stuff if you are willing to crit mine

EDIT: See post below for a version with a solo!
Attachments:
Breaking Me.zip
"If you want beef, then bring the ruckus." - Marilyn Monroe
Last edited by USCENDONE BENE at Feb 19, 2007,
ch715dallat
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#2
that was great, really really liked the chorus riff. and the small solo fitted perfectly, i loved the bass intro, i suck at writting bass because ive never really played it, but that sounded good, no faults i could pick out really, just need to work on getting some drums on there and youve got a finished song.
MustaineV
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Join date: Jul 2006
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#3
I like the ideas, mind if i fiddle with it a bit ? It's screaming for a solo and some drums
USCENDONE BENE
I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
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#4
^^ sure, go ahead, and please send me a link if you have anything i can Crit
"If you want beef, then bring the ruckus." - Marilyn Monroe
USCENDONE BENE
I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
1,743 IQ
#5
Here is the same song, but with a new solo. It still needs a little work, but hopefully your crit can help me make it better. Enjoy
Attachments:
Breaking Me, New solo.zip
"If you want beef, then bring the ruckus." - Marilyn Monroe