#1
So I got bored today and came up with this.
Attachments:
heavy stuff.zip
Gear:
Epiphone Les Paul Custom
Dean Michael Schenker Custom
Ibanez MTM1
Ibanez Canary Chorus
Ibanez Shark Distortion
Boss CS-3
Dunlop DB01 Dimbag Crybaby From Hell
#2
i thought it was pretty cool, didnt get bored listenin to it really, aslong as you come up with a few more riffs for it and dont rely on those 2 soley then it could turn out great it had a metallica/megadethy feel to it which i really like just add more to it.
#3
Pretty cool. Intro reminded me of Orion, then got kinda Sabbathy for a bit, then the faster section was pretty cool for a bit, then got a little repetitive. A few leads would really liven it up.


Crit mine please? Link in sig.
Thanks.
#4
It sounded a little formulated to me and a little repetitive. The riffs you have in there now are good but need work try to do some cool veriations upon them and add a couple new riffs or so. A solo would also help make it sound less repetitive.

I also really didnt thing the speed up and speed down things worked at the end of bars 53 and 61 sounded good at all it seemed like it didnt belong

Overall what you have now seems more like a good song idea rather than a song. Some of the riffs need alot of attention and work along with other things 5/10
#6
Thanks guys.I'll keep on working on it then.

Gear:
Epiphone Les Paul Custom
Dean Michael Schenker Custom
Ibanez MTM1
Ibanez Canary Chorus
Ibanez Shark Distortion
Boss CS-3
Dunlop DB01 Dimbag Crybaby From Hell