#1
So,so u Think this life is lost
But why so long..But why so long but why so..
And we know theres not one thing to say
To Change your heart to change the part …to change

So say it this life is but a shadow
Why cant this speak is it hard understanding I feel so weak
Is it hard understanding..Im oh so sick
Is life overrated? Why cant I speak this love that’s so demanding
I Cant Speak!

Im Not Afraid To Live For Ever
Im not afraid to walk alone no more
Baby if you stay ill keep on living
Nothing u can say will stop me moving on

Can u say my face is going pale
Cause now were on the other side
Of a jet black poolside manor
And im so weak
Is it hard understanding
Im incomplete
A love that’s so neglecting
I Cant speak

Im Not Afraid To Live For Ever
Im not afraid to walk alone no more
Baby if you stay ill keep on living
Nothing u can say will stop me Moving on
Im Not Afraid To Live For Ever
Im not afraid to walk alone no more
Baby if you stay ill keep on living
Nothing u can say will stop me Moving on

These black lights are moving on
These bright lites are holding on to me
I Said

I see you standing next to me
Holding my hand patiently
Awake And unafraid to sleep or said
Cause I see you standing next to me
Holding my hand patiently
Awake And unafraid to sleep or Said


Cause I see you standing next to me
Holding my hand patiently
Awake And unafraid to sleep or said

Cause I see you standing next to me
Holding my hand patiently
Awake And unafraid to sleep or Said


Im Not Afraid To Live For Ever
Im not afraid to walk alone no more
Baby if you stay ill keep on living
Nothing u can say will stop me Moving on

Im Not Afraid To Live For Ever
Im not afraid to walk alone no more
Baby if you stay ill keep on living
Nothing u can say will stop me Moving on

Im Not Afraid To Live For Ever
Im not afraid to walk alone no more
Baby if you stay ill keep on living
Nothing u can say will stop me Moving on
#2
Man, did you just edit the lyrics to 'Famous Last Words' by My Chemical Romance?

Seriously, the chorus is so blatantly similar (and I can tell you've heard it because they're in your picture right now.)

Sorry but that was what really hit me while reading so I'm not doing a real crit because you seem to have essentially ripped off something you were listening to.
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#3
i dont think its that much like famous last words there deffinetly is a resemblance in song structure and the chorus is a bit similar but honestly how many choruses go

"im not afraid to keep on living"

well there is a ton so good job but shape it up a lil bit so u dont get sewed.
#4
Yeah, dude, you totally ripped that off of My Famous Last Words. I mean, there's differences, but primarily it seems you just sorta changed some of the words and reworded a few things.

Please, be original.
Cause I love feelin' dirty
And I love feelin' cheap
And I love it when you hurt me
So drive those staples deep