Spark1284
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Join date: Feb 2004
244 IQ
#2
the organ as the principle instrument might be a little too powerful, vocals on top would probably make it seem less dramatic though. cool riff, whatever that percussion is it goes nicely, it is deffinately a cool new sound but i dont like the verse chorus verse format
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#3
it's not verse- chorus-verse.

it's verse-bridge-verse-bridge-chorus-outro
and it's like that so it works with the lyrics.

I just want to sleep forever.


Spark1284
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Join date: Feb 2004
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#4
i meant verse chorus and im probably using that expression wrong... i just meant the arrangement is very mainstream and predictable. i easily knew what section was next before it came up. and if this was a lyric based song then the music shouldnt matter too much as long as its vocal friendly, should it? i always assumed that to post a song people were saying that they wrote a song with integrity, which isnt always tru but what id expect from you and every one else who is on here regularly. im not trying to shit on your post or anything... i just dont see much of a point
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sorry to bust everyones bubble but lamb of god arent "hardcore" theyre death metal, and therefore metal.
HumanitysDeath
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Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#6
I liked it.
But, it felt like something was missing. It seems like it built up some very subtle anticipation, but never gave any real sort of a climax.

What you have, I do like. Very well written.
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CapnKickass
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Join date: Dec 2006
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#8
It's like the song is trying to cast a spell on you to make you fall asleep, or maybe its because I'm already tired. It reminds of music you'd hear in a video game, like Dark Cloud 2.
Darc
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Join date: Dec 2006
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#10
Awesome. Very very nice xD.