Change the drum line, i mean kind of destroy it , the music you have there is too good for that blast-beat inspired drum-line.. Very nice music.

I'd suggest trying to vary the intro a little since it's a bit predictable and less musical than the rest of the song. The solo is ok to say the least , but needs to be longer and the rhythm needs to be a little less violent because the song's so mellow.. Keep the lead as aggressive as you want but the rhythm can use a little toning down. Just a thought

Nice work..