EFTA guitarist
Join date: Mar 2006
422 IQ
Okay so this is a little buildup I just did.... It's not the whole song so please dont say it's short still working on the rest thx everybody.... C4C

You can crit my other one too please, not much crits !

Last edited by KoRn-Tristan at Feb 17, 2007,
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2005
477 IQ
I thought it sounded pretty good except for the acoustic guitar
I listened to it once the way you wrote it, and it sounded ok, then I listened to it again with the acoustic guitar muted and i loved it
I would say shorten the acoustic intro and then take the acoustic guitar out whenever the other guitars come in and it would be really sweet

crit mine?
Wheres the paper towels?!
Join date: Mar 2005
21 IQ
This is reallllly good, I agree with Scorpion618 though. It sounds way better without the acoustic guitar. Keep it up, I love this song.
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Join date: Dec 2006
294 IQ
I agree, The intro was to long but the rest was good.