#1
This was my first ever song, I was heart broken at the time and a friend told me to let out the pain through artistic means, so..... here you go, the song is in C major and I improv. on between verses (In C major)

**Verse one**

[Am]Ever since you left me baby.

[Dm]Yes you with the radiant eyes.

[G7]I couldn't help but see life's true sorrows.

[C]They flow and hypnotize.

[Dm]Like leaves in the wind,

[F]Your love isn't constant.

[Dm]Like flesh on a dead corpse, [Am] rotting away.

[F]Your love means nothing to me anymore,

So won't you [G]just [C]go [G]away?

***Repeats Verse One***

**Verse two**

[Am/F] If I saw you in pain [Asus2/F] I would come to you

[Am/F] If I saw you in pain [Dm] I would run to you!

[Am]But since you left me baby [Am7] I've been down and low

[G7] Just watching you [C]go


Its short but it was my first.
#2
**Verse one**

[Am]Ever since you left me baby.

[Dm]Yes you with the radiant eyes.

[G7]I couldn't help but see life's true sorrows.

[C]They flow and hypnotize.
wow i love this first bit

[Dm]Like leaves in the wind,

[F]Your love isn't constant.

[Dm]Like flesh on a dead corpse, [Am] rotting away.

[F]Your love means nothing to me anymore,

So won't you [G]just [C]go [G]away?
the second bit isnt as good, but still good. the last line doesnt seem to fit
***Repeats Verse One***

**Verse two**

[Am/F] If I saw you in pain [Asus2/F] I would come to you

[Am/F] If I saw you in pain [Dm] I would run to you!

[Am]But since you left me baby [Am7] I've been down and low

[G7] Just watching you [C]go
not complaints here


must say dam good job for ur first song. would love to hear it with music and all.crit upon the unkown if u could