Just a few (4) melodies that I've come up with for the bass. Nothing too much, just some little pieces that I want to hear peoples opinion of, and whether any of them are worth expanding into songs or not. Crit for crit, just leave a link or song title in your post.
Bass Melodies.zip
"Their fate is in each others hands as they decide whether to share... or to shaft"
Robert Kilroy-Silk from his sadly shortlived quiz-show Shafted.

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i really liked this first one, it reminded me of a song in mario 64 called dire dire docks.

the second one i think needs at least one background part with it, right now its kinda of repetitive.

the last one was good when the strings and piano came in, but the time signature changes sounded a little weird when the bass played alone.

overall they were very well written.
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