#2
your music is bad and you should feel bad!!!

the first song sounded like freaking panic at the disco. especially the singer.
the second song started out sounding like a ripoff of death cab for cutie, but then just turned stupid pop emo later on.
seriously, stop pumping out these stupid pop songs that are flooding mass culture and start something that will actually help put good music back on the radio.
#3
what the hell is wrong with your voice?!
Quote by Virgil_Hart05
Beating the elderly is a big favourite of mine. Also, pushing kids over and kicking pregnant women in the womb is fun.



Right now we're called 'Various Artists' just to fuck over people with iPods
#5
the voice was really kind of awful... it was over emphasized, no energy and no character...
i liked the tune to shipwrecked but it needs a lot of work.

it all sounds vaguely familiar and i dont listen to that kind of music so that might mean something...

back to the drawing board buddy.
Quote by Guitar0player
You're Thurstonsexual

Happily E-Married to En_zed
The public doesn't want new music; the main thing that it demands of a composer is that he be dead.
-- Arthur Honegger

Enjoy reading? Please crit my work .
#6
gracias thurston for being constructive

ya im by no means a singer,but i tried to toss some words on and call it a song
we all see how that worked out

back to the drawing board indeed

more crits appreciated