#1
Yeah, so i've never posted any lyrics on here, I'm not good at putting words to music and definately not very good at rhyming and all that. So i just wrote out some stuff at about 3 am this morning, couldn't sleep, So this is it and i will crit 4 crit just give the link...thanks

An Ocean Overflowing With Sinking Ships

Those nights I spent floating in the deepest of oceans,
passing the time hoping you’d follow.
I found myself giving in to the sea
and letting myself sink to the bottom where no light shines through.
When the water began to pour into my lungs,
I was pulled to the surface and lifted up to the moon,
where I could see what I tried to leave behind, the mother asleep in her bed, praying every night, that I’d just forget what’s not true…

As soon as I had realized what I had done,
I was falling back down to where I was needed.
I woke to the sound of sirens and saw nothing but bright lights.
My destination was a hospital bed,
the place where prayers would be sent,
lives would be changed,
and hearts would be broken.
The regrets followed me everywhere I would go,
hurting my chest whenever I would breathe…

You’re face is beginning to blur,
there won’t be much to remember soon.
I know all of this never matters much to you.
But it’s been my everything for far too long...
#2
Quite good.

Bby any chance did you write this to Brand New's Play Crack the Sky.

Cause it would go well over that progression.
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#3
no...i didn't really mean for it to go that way, brand new is actually my favorite band, i just randomly put everything into seperate lines and it turned out like that...kind of weird

i was actually listening to the cure while writing this
Last edited by sobrandnew2232 at Feb 18, 2007,