Spark1284
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Join date: Feb 2004
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#2
its simple, a mind numbing simple and i want to tell u scrap it, but i really like the riff. the first one not so much, but the second. its not super fancy, its not super original but i like it. it could make a spectacular radio rock song
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#3
I actually liked it. I thought it was catchy. And I can definitely see this being played on the radio.

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#5
i gotta agree with these guys, it is incredibly catchy, id love to see it finished and with lyrics too...i like the last bar of the second solo, it reminded me of 'show me how to live' by audioslave, at the very end wat cornell does with his voice u did with the guitar,,,idk thats just wat it remind me of,,but yeah i def see this on the radio sumday