#1
As you can see, mentally im not alright
My intro to disease, cant help myself
In the end, our days are shortening
I cannont feel you anymore

[CHORUS]
As i see life fade away, i hear a voice in the dark,
leave the light on, SO I CAN BREATHE AGAIN!
[CHORUS]

Asylum stares me in the eye, not alright
Unnamed, i need a hero to save me ftom this day
OH GOD HELP ME! blown my mind apart
CANT FEEL SHIT ANYMORE!

[CHORUS]

A man with a disease, wake me im alive
Wake the dead, shall rise, Unholy but the
sacrificed, Why are you gone, suicide,
fighting a war for your life, but what about me, I AM
M.I.A.!

[CHORUS]

Now you see your worl, ripped up by your war, now you see our world is twisting and spiraling down, 3 chapters to your life (love hope and MISERY!) cofess now it aint too late,
THIS IS OUR WICKED END!
Call me Sean
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#2
is it a song or a poem cos a song should really be broken down into lines rather than paragraphs. having said that, the concept is good - slightly random to my eyes but that might be the layout. who's the man with the disease?
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