#2
i like the guitar...it kind of reminds me of matt costa...but the singin was...meh...good enough
#3
1. Learn how to write

2. It wouldn't play for me
I was once heavily prominent on these forums from 2004-2007, let's see how long I can stay now that I'm back.
#4
ohh really.. i tried it again and it seemed 2 work. oh yer and sorry about the writing.. im too used to using msn haha
#5
I think you did a good job. This is the kind of song that would definietly get me out on the dance floor.

I like the guitar, but the vocals need a little more work.
Quote by p o e
lmfao man thats so sick and depraved and yet funny all at once

my hats off to you IbanezSA160, you have embodied the Pit into one little poem