#1
Hey ppl. This is my heavy metal song.


There's a poison, thats been eating inside of you.
Lost in the chains, of the unknown side of you
A place of whispers, and a place that's cold
A haunting image of the world has been told
We all get up and send a message to the unborn evil
Wish it away, but the beast has already been born
The unfolding facts of the hidden lies above us
But to be underneath of the grave, too see the eyes that glow
Moving the seconds to there proper place, wait with the shadows

Pre-Chorus
Catching bodys from the sky
Breaking the fall of your life
This isn't your day to die

Chorus
These sky lines of chaos
Chaos raining beyond, the blood
Beyond the shadows , beyond our love
Magic in the smiles, the fountains of skulls
The maze of life, an the forest of our souls
The lifeless puddle of the dead, now a shadowed palace
over the hills, to see the avacaster
Will our faith,be strong, will our love be binded
In these sky lines of chaos
Sky lines of chaos

Verse 2
Below, and inside the cave of leeches and glass
This all ended up drowned inside of a bubble
A bubble thats been surfacing through the hate
The jar that holds the sunset, an the bottle that holds the moon
They hold on to it, as if it were a damn empty box
Souless, with no remorse, lashing out st the control of the
Falling apart statue, guarded the words from the top of the stairs
The stars seemed to have died, on the cliffs of no return
Lighting an angry fury of nature is unleashed, saved by the sound
Of a precious, and beautiful note played from a girl with crystal eyes
These broken spells have fallen, the only gate to hear the heart is gone
A myst of memory, the founders of the wings, and fears
These drafts of spinning, an swinging things, crumbling, before you
There is no everything

Pre Chorus
Breking the fall
watching the sky
catchin bodys
this could be your life

Chorus

These sky lines of chaos
Chaos raining beyond, the blood
Beyond the shadows , beyond our love
Magic in the smiles, the fountains of skulls
The maze of life, an the forest of our souls
The lifeless puddle of the dead, now a shadowed palace
over the hills, to see the avacaster
Will our faith,be strong, will our love be binded
In these sky lines of chaos
sky lines of chaos

Guitar solo

Well here it is folks!! my metal metal song!!! lol
Last edited by lester2215 at Feb 19, 2007,
#2
i can definitaly see a metal band singing that, i can tell you didnt put this together in 5 min.
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#4
The imagery is pretty strong (and well written) in the second verse. I like the flow of the whole thing in general. I guess the first verse is fairly weak compared to the second .. but it really isn't even that bad. I like this.