#1
My fairwells hurt my heart
They make me feel sad inside
Until I see your pretty face again
Nothing can help the space
Just a relay race
But impossible to win

Told that its only 7 weeks to go
Told that its only 7 weeks to you
Told its not that far from it

All I say is any time without you
Makes me feel so dead inside
Its because you break me
You enjoy all these things I hate
I don’t care if you cant relate
To the feelings I feel for you

Told that its only 7 weeks to go
Told that its only 7 weeks to you
Told its not that far from it

Wishing you were lying here
Looking at the moon
It reminds me of you
The distance between us
It shows we have trust
To believe
To believe

Told that its only 7 weeks to go
Told that its only 7 weeks to you
Told its not that far from it

I die as you look into me
You make me so down
But also take me high
One side to the other
Never said to my mother
What I have confided in you
I die as you look into me
I die as you look into me
I die as you look into me

You are what is left of me
You are the feelings I feel
As the world crumbles by my feet
You shout and keep me real
One thing breaks me
It shakes me
In a submission
One more thing I can list on

Nothing keeps me as happy as you.
As you………..
As you………..
As you………..

metal_ore (www.myspace.com/defendingthedefeated)
#2
"My fairwells hurt my heart
They make me feel sad inside
Until I see your pretty face again
Nothing can help the space
Just a relay race
But impossible to win

Told that its only 7 weeks to go
Told that its only 7 weeks to you
Told its not that far from it

All I say is any time without you
Makes me feel so dead inside
Its because you break me
You enjoy all these things I hate
I don’t care if you cant relate
To the feelings I feel for you

Told that its only 7 weeks to go
Told that its only 7 weeks to you
Told its not that far from it

Wishing you were lying here
Looking at the moon
It reminds me of you
The distance between us
It shows we have trust
To believe
To believe

Told that its only 7 weeks to go
Told that its only 7 weeks to you
Told its not that far from it"

not that i know what im talking about, its a good song, but i wouldnt repeat that told that its only 7 weeks stuff after every verse, well during the first 3.
#4
I enjoyed it, I'm getting very sick of love songs recently but mainly because they mostly seem to be inept, I felt this conveyed a much strong emotion than most song of it's kind. My only suggestion would be to try to maybe start the song off with a stronger stanza. Other than that it looks good my friend!