#1
i wrote this song last week, and recently ive been trying to put chords to the chorus, or power chords or whatever, ill list that at the bottom. my ex gf inspired me about this as you could probably tell, because i want to get back together with her.

What went wrong?
The only thing I did was right
I stuck by you day and night
And now it’s over

I just need you back again
Like the sweet November wind
The only thing I need is you
And for me, that is so true

Words cannot express how I feel
You’re the most perfect one
That I wish I could feel

And hold all night
Oh so tight
Giving my love to you
Forever

I just need you back again
Like the sweet November wind
The only thing I need is you
And for me, that is so true

You are the only thing I wanted
You are the only thing I needed
You are the most perfect thing
In this world

I just need you back again
Like the sweet November wind
The only thing I need is you
And for me, that is so true


Chords:


l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l2--------------------------------l
l---------------------------------l
I just need you back again

l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l6--------------------------------l
l6--------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l---------------------------------l
Like the sweet November wind

l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l---------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l2--------------------------------l
The only thing I need is you

l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l6-------------4------------------l
l4-------------4------------------l
l4-------------2------------------l
And for me, that is so true
#2
What went wrong?
The only thing I did was right
I stuck by you day and night
And now it’s over- lengthen the line...and now its all over..think it fits better

I just need you back again
Like the sweet November wind
The only thing I need is you
And for me, that is so true- its awesome sweet and simple makes you feel how you feel

Words cannot express how I feel
You’re the most perfect one
That I wish I could feel- a bit short if its a chorus or just a fill then i like

And hold all night
Oh so tight
Giving my love to you
Forever-you could have some guitar here...if its slow you could have a cool joe satch solo!

I just need you back again
Like the sweet November wind
The only thing I need is you
And for me, that is so true- chorus....yup still loving it

You are the only thing I wanted
You are the only thing I needed
You are the most perfect thing
In this world-maybe change the you slight repetion...depends how its sung though

I just need you back again
Like the sweet November wind
The only thing I need is you
And for me, that is so true


Chords:


l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l2--------------------------------l
l---------------------------------l
I just need you back again

l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l6--------------------------------l
l6--------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l---------------------------------l
Like the sweet November wind

l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l---------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l4--------------------------------l
l2--------------------------------l
The only thing I need is you

l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l----------------------------------l
l6-------------4------------------l
l4-------------4------------------l
l4-------------2------------------l
And for me, that is so true

simple but nice chords

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#3
you did some good rhymeing in some of the verses.

nice work
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