crit on my blues solo would be good

i think my bends and vibrato could do with work. what do you guys think?
my rig:
gibson les paul standard vintage sunburst with burstbucker pro pickups
marshall avt 150h and 412a cab
dunlop crybaby wah
boss dd-3 digital delay
didnt really like it either, the tone of the guitar just drives you crazy
yeah, I think you need to do some serious work on your tone
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thats why im say to whoaa on my ears with that tone and get rid of the shit and hair cut you look like some computere geek lol fagooott
Are you joking? First tone with that bend I was like "wtf" :S
Oh, constructive... yeah um, work on your bends (none of them hit the right note).. and try to be in key more than 50% of the time

Sorry if it's harsh but... it's really quite painful to listen to
Everything's been said...maybe too harshly, but I do think it could have been better. In terms of tone and playing, but it wasn't terrible. With a little more work you could get it better. It wasn't as bad as some said, but i won't lie and tell you it was terrific. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
wasn't too much "blues" going on in there, sorry to say. it sounded more like a 3 doors down 'lead break'
Like the guy above me said, I didn't really hear the blues. In the beginning, the solo doesn't really go with the background. Also, as said, the tone isn't so great. This is ok, with some more work I think this could be something. It also stops after just 54 seconds.

Mind critiquing mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522123