#1
I have not yet wrote the guitar part to this song, but it more then likely will be in a Folk-Rock style, or a 90's Alt. Rock song. More then likely a mixture of the two.


Just let me burn down slowly
like the fire to the match
Burnt down to the snub
Caught in the heat and ash
And if you listen closely
you can hear the story
of a boy left with matches
left to his own devices

And now this building's burning
and my eyes reflecting red
Left to my own devices
I'll be the devil incarnate

Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down
Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down

Like the fire to the match
If you come too close you might just catch
A little bit of heat
That I keep burning right underneath
my skin. I'll cool to the touch
well you, you'll heat right up
yeah you, you'll heat right up

And now this building's burning
and my eyes reflecting red
Left to my own devices
I'll be the devil incarnate

Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down
Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down

And I'll use this fire
to keep you safe to keep you warm
even though it consumes me
eats me threw to my core

Just let me burn down slowly
Eats me threw to my core
Just let me burn down slowly
I'll burn to keep you warm
Just let me burn down slowly
like a fire to the match
Just let me burn down slowly
I'll be the devil incarnate

Just let me burn down slowly
just let me burn down
*Repeat chorus and fade out*


Not your traditional love song I guess.
#2
Just let me burn down slowly
like the fire to the match
Burnt down to the snub
Caught in the heat and ash
And if you listen closely
you can hear the story
of a boy left with matches
left to his own devices
idk about the last 2 lines, not as good as the rest

And now this building's burning
and my eyes reflecting red
Left to my own devices
I'll be the devil incarnate
idk if the last line is using proper grammer or not,sounds bit wierd to me

Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down
Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down

Like the fire to the match
If you come too close you might just catch
A little bit of heat
That I keep burning right underneath
my skin. I'll cool to the touch
well you, you'll heat right up
yeah you, you'll heat right up
well, i would make it burning bright underneath, and end it with out the 'my skin' becuz its inplied. mabe put' but my skin is cool to the touch

And now this building's burning
and my eyes reflecting red
Left to my own devices
I'll be the devil incarnate

Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down
Just let me burn down slowly
Just let me burn down

And I'll use this fire
to keep you safe to keep you warm
even though it consumes me
eats me threw to my core
i think u used the wrong through. its through no threw

Just let me burn down slowly
Eats me threw to my core
Just let me burn down slowly
I'll burn to keep you warm
Just let me burn down slowly
like a fire to the match
Just let me burn down slowly
I'll be the devil incarnate
ok i really like this part

Just let me burn down slowly
just let me burn down

nice i would have the last 2 lines fade, but thts just me. very good, just some very small things buged me a bit. 8.5/10

crit 'the echoes' if u could
*Repeat chorus and fade out*