#1
Doesnt take a genius to guess what this is about, and also the 3rd verse is a joke but I liked it anyway.

I didn’t expect to see you like that
A changed person when the fingers go snap
Dressed in black, powdered in white
We cant help you now, your beyond the plight

Heaven or hell wouldn’t want you now
And looking like that, neither would I

Hands in the air, screams in my ear
PLEEEASE! ... Can you **** off er there?
We’ve lost all hope now this is the end
So WHY... Can’t you just be you?

Heaven or hell wouldn’t want you now
And looking like that, neither would she

“You totally rock dude”
“Your awesome” “Your wicked”
Hmm Nah mate.. you’re a dickhead
You give me the fingers
So I give you one back
Now lets roll and get some smack

Heaven or hell wouldn’t want you now
And looking like that, neither would we

Thanks for reading
#2
hahaha lol pretty intrestnig.i like the heaven or hell wouldnt want you now part, an then the end..Pretty hilarious lol,
#4
i like the heaven and hell thing to, i think its about a kid who is emo and cuts his wrists or somthing, am i right? can u critic my songs for me, there in my sig?
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#5
Sorta right, its about how people just change into emo then slowly drift away
#6
this was clever, I liked it, especially the chorus. You should keep the third verse, its funny. What kind of music would you put this too, I hear it in my head as either punk, or done like and emo song to be ironic lol.
#7
I dont really know what sorta music it would go into but if it was used in my band it would be like indieish ( Brit indie I mean )