#1
It's pretty straight forward. I'm very proud of this one. Chords repeat through whole thing.

Hurt Nobody (Dust)

Em D Am
I don't wanna hurt nobody
Em D C
Sometimes it just turns out that way
I know I can never take it back
But maybe I'll make up for it someday

When the sun don't come up on Monday
And on Sunday night the moon just holds its place
That may be the next time
You're gonna see a smile on my face

All we know will blow away
We created all in which we lust
We are just the sum of what we're made of
And in the end all we are is dust

What makes me me is starting to fade away
What I used to trust I can't depend on
I think I'll go down to the station
And find a track to lay me head upon

I don't wanna hurt nobody
But my tires are spinning where they are
I tried so many times to warn them
It's a bad idea to stand behind my car
#2
good work man, i cant see anything to critic
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#3
Em D Am
I don't wanna hurt nobody
Em D C
Sometimes it just turns out that way
I know I can never take it back
But maybe I'll make up for it someday
i would change to 'but maybe ill make it up someday'

When the sun don't come up on Monday
And on Sunday night the moon just holds its place
That may be the next time
You're gonna see a smile on my face

All we know will blow away
We created all in which we lust
We are just the sum of what we're made of
And in the end all we are is dust
sounds like that one song by the band kansa"dust in the wind" my suggestion is change blow to scatter

What makes me me is starting to fade away
What I used to trust I can't depend on
I think I'll go down to the station
And find a track to lay me head upon
i dont like the last 2 lines. they sound a bit weak and not good

I don't wanna hurt nobody
But my tires are spinning where they are
I tried so many times to warn them
It's a bad idea to stand behind my car

i would change it to, its not so smart to stand behind a car"


hm, pretty good, jsut small suggestions is all i had. but the 2 liens i pointed out i didnt liek at all, they sounded like something coming from some beginner lyric composer.

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#5
this songs kool man.Imo no changes needed. I played the chords, an sang it a few different patterns, but each way i did it, made the song good! .Its straight forward but still its still pretty smooth in the words. I could relate to it.