Hi, I have a new song I finished called "The Waiting". I am still very much a newbie at this but I would like some feedback and constructive criticism. I am not a shredder or a technically gifted player but I try my best to convey emotion through my playing. I know this may not be everyone's cup of tea but please give it a few verses to settle in. Thanks

purty damn good. I like.
My Rig:
Fender American Strat w/ texas specials
Martin DX1
Blueridge Br73
1968 Domino Californian
Stagg bass
2006 Fender hot rod deluxe
Gretsch Electromatic compact amp
among others