BC_Joshlz
Outworld!
Join date: Jan 2007
935 IQ
#1
Hey guys, please help me out here. im not sure what i can do to improve this song. I'm not a drummer or a bassist. But i thought i did well with the bass. hehe. anywayz just let me know what i need to do to improve it. Thanks guys.
Attachments:
Hardcore.zip
My Rig:
Guitars:
BC Rich Mockingbird Evil Edge SE w/ EMG 81/85
Custom Strat
Ashton Acoustic Electric
Amps
Peavey Studio Pro 112
Laney Hardcore mXd 30
Pedals
Digitech Grunge Distortion

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Last edited by BC_Joshlz at Feb 21, 2007,
_-Skeletor-_
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2006
799 IQ
#2
mine didnt work..o wait yes it did and also to improve it mayb u could use some harmonies and use of heaps of triplets like on the palm mutes and stuff
Last edited by _-Skeletor-_ at Feb 20, 2007,
antiflag125462
God
Join date: Feb 2006
1,336 IQ
#3
here are some things i noticed and some suggestions

- it is really plain

- you should add lead guitar

- don't use so many repeats. add some fills(especially on drums)

- turn the bass up, it sounds good
BC_Joshlz
Outworld!
Join date: Jan 2007
935 IQ
#5
The bass in Drop D was a mistake and i have fixed it. But so far no way has actually commented on how i can improve the song. Be really good if someone could actually CRIT it properley.
My Rig:
Guitars:
BC Rich Mockingbird Evil Edge SE w/ EMG 81/85
Custom Strat
Ashton Acoustic Electric
Amps
Peavey Studio Pro 112
Laney Hardcore mXd 30
Pedals
Digitech Grunge Distortion

Pyromaniac of the AUSTRALIA FTW! Club.