#1
i know there are sloppy parts and i suck. i just want crits for my tone. iv been buying and selling my gears for the past few days.. so please i need some crits.. oh and i only know the first parts of the song.. thanks..

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#2
awesome sounds with the tone and stuff.. and its good cause its different to the original i like it

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#3
yeh mixed it up a bit there which i quite like, the tones good.....its bit sloppy tho, but you are better than me...nice work there!
#4
I like the tone only thing i would want is it to be a little warmer but that's just an eq preference.

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#8
Very well played, love the tone, love the parts that you change got to say its a 10/10 from me It would be even better if you did the whole song.
#9
Where did you get the backing track? The tone is great. I just don't like the way you played the song. The original Rules. PM me the jam track though.
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#10
^^ i got it from hes offcial website http://jerryc.tw/ a long time ago. thanks for the crit guys!! but i need more.. thanks..
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#11
Your tone is gorgeous, I'm really impressed. You should definitely do a full version.
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#12
I love how you made this an original. gj
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#14
Not another one =/

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