I like the guitar work a lot. The vocals need some work IMO. What did you record it with?
i like the guitar and the actual lyrics but the singing def needs work
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Ooo I recognise that chord progression/rhythm etc.

Take that as a good sign.

Singing needs work though.

Good effort.