#1
here

Sorry the quality isn't great. Please post any comments or criticism, and I'll gladly crit and songs you post here as well.
Last edited by Spamwise at Feb 20, 2007,
#5
your a bit off time. i like the riff and the harmonies. you should deffinatley go for a full band type sound. try beatcraft for drums.
Too cool for a signature.
#6
yeah I think the chorus part is a little off in parts, that's what happens you don't record all of it at the same time I guess. that'd be fixed if i was in a band. thanks for the suggestion and for listening
#7
Quote by chrisatgrace
your a bit off time. i like the riff and the harmonies. you should deffinatley go for a full band type sound. try beatcraft for drums.

I also forgot to add, what do you think of the solo? as I said the quality isn't great so it might have been hard to hear, but did it seem okay or sloppy?
#9
Interesting riff, sounds pretty cool. I like the solo part too, fits well with the rhythm part. Ya, I would definately recommend putting in some type of drum element, it will sound better, and it would help your timing and stuff. Also, I'm not sure how you sing, but I'd love to hear some vocals in there. Sound pretty cool so far, keep going with it.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=525728
#10
Quote by qotsa1278
Interesting riff, sounds pretty cool. I like the solo part too, fits well with the rhythm part. Ya, I would definately recommend putting in some type of drum element, it will sound better, and it would help your timing and stuff. Also, I'm not sure how you sing, but I'd love to hear some vocals in there. Sound pretty cool so far, keep going with it.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=525728

Thank you! I'd put vocals in..but me and singing, well we don't mix good.

sure!