Nice man.
The acoustics tone was sweet but your voice could be slightly more powerful.
Add some reverb to it and try to make it stronger.

Please crit my vids (in my sig)
i really like.. maybe turn the volume of the vocals.. and the tempo is a little too fast.. and add a reverb for both tracks..

crit me??


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thanks everybody. The vocals sound thin i think because I am just using my shitty computer mic to record. I will crit all who commented very soon.
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