#3
I think your G and D string is out of tune, and it's a bit off time in some places.

You have a good tone for this solo, and you pulled it off nicely. Personally I like to play the last note in this solo an octave higher, just a tip
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lmfao man thats so sick and depraved and yet funny all at once

my hats off to you IbanezSA160, you have embodied the Pit into one little poem
#4
This is pretty cool. The intro drags on a little, and the song is a little repetitive, but the rhythm is really cool, and I like its spacy, trippy reverbish sound. The acoustic guitar might sound better with another rhythm, which has already been said, but I think it's really cool overall. It's catchy, and it might sound great with some vox. Keep it up. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
#5
Nice job. I think the whole reverb sound makes the track sound of lesser quality. As for your guitar, i would change it up a bit, the leads sound like the same three notes repeated over and over again. Other than that it was great.

Mind critiquing mine? http://
#7
in the beggining there are some notes out of time, apart from I liked the rest of the music.
It's simply and the chord progression is agreable, altough it's classical..
The song gets a bit boring without vocals :S
nice work..
hands down.