#2
I'm listening to it right now... the intro sounds cool, so far. I like how the bass is slightly overdriven, but not too strong of distortion. Now we're rockin'. I think the drums should drop out in the one part where it switches between the two guitars. This reminds me of trivium/megadeth/black sabbath kind of. I like it. The main riff is pretty catchy, and it sounds pretty well recorded. Good job. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
#3
The intro was very very good!!!
The main riff i friggin loved and reminded me of When All Light Dies by Trivium and the parts after that were greeat
The part around 2.10 minutes was great and loved the harmony to it!!
#4
Quote by False_God
ok, I completly redone the original version which is here for peps who didnt get a listen the last time..
Song

I changed a few parts are you can see!
Well enjoy! and also, what one do you think is better?
http://media.putfile.com/Blood-Stained-Girl-new



I havent heard of the original but ill give it a listen...

Intros fine awesome...riffs are adequate...oh the 2.10 part is sweet!

Great stuff man...

Ababil

P.S. can you crit ine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=521934&highlight=Adventures+Songwriting
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#5
Quote by gunsnroses89
I'm listening to it right now... the intro sounds cool, so far. I like how the bass is slightly overdriven, but not too strong of distortion. Now we're rockin'. I think the drums should drop out in the one part where it switches between the two guitars. This reminds me of trivium/megadeth/black sabbath kind of. I like it. The main riff is pretty catchy, and it sounds pretty well recorded. Good job. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091

Ya, it creates a whole different feel to it! What part is that?
and thanks man!! and Will do!!


Quote by chinospike
The intro was very very good!!!
The main riff i friggin loved and reminded me of When All Light Dies by Trivium and the parts after that were greeat
The part around 2.10 minutes was great and loved the harmony to it!!

Thanks man! Is that the octave harmonys? Becuase I love them! lol..


Quote by Ababil_Albarn
I havent heard of the original but ill give it a listen...

Intros fine awesome...riffs are adequate...oh the 2.10 part is sweet!

Great stuff man...

Ababil

P.S. can you crit ine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=521934&highlight=Adventures+Songwriting

Thanks! and will do now!!