#1
I’m out of reasons
Tell me what I am
Now I find that lie’s hurt more
I never knew who I was
Find you hide more shadows
Then there is shade
Always believing
That you’d hide everything

[Chorus::]
Never needed
Never seen it
I could only forgive you
Never smiled
Took awhile
You could still be Ashamed
Always teasing
Keep pleasing
Its all you could give me
I’ll keep calling you
Cause you got me falling away

[Chorus]

Always deceiving
Every little word I say
Being Easy every time
You still think your so new
Trying to get through the message that I made
So I enjoy the life that you messed

[Chorus]

Never had the chance to make it
Always leaving me here to crawl
Its all gonna be the same in the end
Its only gonna take longer
#2
I’m out of reasons
Tell me what I am
Now I find that lie’s hurt more
More than what? Clarification needed here.
I never knew who I was
Already said in the second line, this is a tad bit redundant, in my opinion.
Find you hide more shadows
Then there is shade
Always believing
That you’d hide everything

[Chorus::]
Never needed
Never seen it
I could only forgive you
Never smiled
Took awhile
You could still be Ashamed
Always teasing
Keep pleasing
Its all you could give me
I’ll keep calling you
Cause you got me falling away

Nice verse, no complaints here.
[Chorus]

Always deceiving
Every little word I say
What is decieving here? The you or your words. Clarification needed.
Being Easy every time
You still think your so new
Trying to get through the message that I made
This line is tad bit too long for my tastes.
So I enjoy the life that you messed
You messed sounds weird without 'up' at the end. Take a look at that and decide if there's another way you can phrase this.

[Chorus]

Never had the chance to make it
Always leaving me here to crawl
Its all gonna be the same in the end
Its only gonna take longer

Hmmm... interesting ending. I like it. It's nothing to special, but it gets the job done.

Overall, this is great. You need a bit more imagery or something more for the listener/reader to grasp and hold onto through the song. Sometimes the intended understood subjects of the lines were a bit unclear and left me questioning what was going on, so I suggest maybe making stuff like that a bit more specific. Try not to leave us guessing who is doing what. Other than that, great job, man. Nice song.

If you don't mind, please take a look at mine. It's called Ticking Time Bomb. Thanks.
Cause I love feelin' dirty
And I love feelin' cheap
And I love it when you hurt me
So drive those staples deep
#3
figured youd needed a bump anyway.

its all very typical, boring writing. you need to take an angle on something rather than shooting at the same direction as every pop singer on the radio.

sorry to be harsh.