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Here's a song that I wrote for my soon to be ex wife XD

Comments of all kinds are welcome and feel free to post links to your lyrics, I'll be more than glad to comment on them. Thanks.

Through my Eyes

Here I lie going over the last words we said to eachother (I love you)
Wondering if you know how much I mean it
Wondering if you know how much I need it
Having you so far away leaves an emptiness in my heart, my soul
The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

Here I lie going over the last words we said to eachother (I love you)
Hoping you'll forgive me for putting us in this situation
Hoping that you'll understand that I never meant to hurt you (us) this way
The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

Here I lie going over the last words we said to eachother (I love you)
Remebering the brightness in your eyes whenever you would laugh
Remembering the feeling of your hand as it would glide across my skin
The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

Everyday wasted away from you is another day I could never make up to you
Would you forgive me for causing us to be this way?
Could you forgive me?
Everyday I regret putting us in this position
Now all I do is try to imagine all the lost memories we could've had
But knowing we have so many memories, moments, we have yet to make together keeps me going
The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

I need you to see how much I need you...
#2
Quote by Izathatch
Here's a song that I wrote for my soon to be ex wife XD

Comments of all kinds are welcome and feel free to post links to your lyrics, I'll be more than glad to comment on them. Thanks.

Through my Eyes

Here I lie going over the last words we said to eachother (I love you)
Wondering if you know how much I mean it
Wondering if you know how much I need it

i liked the opening lines but 2 or 3 are almost similar except differnce of one word may be you can alter ir a bit like

Wondering if it shows how much I need it



Having you so far away leaves an emptiness in my heart, my soul try and in my soul
it helps to flow a tit atleast melody in which i am singing it

The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes


last line seems forced alot though

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

its ok but still too much of see how going around and its arising sort of a monotony
and 2 & 3 hamper to flow a bit. just expand the chorus say in some other words like i said to much of "see how is going on"


Here I lie going over the last words we said to eachother (I love you)
Hoping you'll forgive me for putting us in this situation
Hoping that you'll understand that I never meant to hurt you (us) this way
The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes


the whole verse seems bit forced

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

Here I lie going over the last words we said to eachother (I love you)
Remebering the brightness in your eyes whenever you would laugh
Remembering the feeling of your hand as it would glide across my skin
The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

Everyday wasted away from you is another day I could never make up to you
Would you forgive me for causing us to be this way?
Could you forgive me?
Everyday I regret putting us in this position
Now all I do is try to imagine all the lost memories we could've had
But knowing we have so many memories, moments, we have yet to make together keeps me going
The only thing I wish more than being able to hold you in my arms is having you see yourself through my eyes

See how much you mean to me
See how beautiful you are to me
See how you are the only lover for me
See how much you are meant for me
See how you are the only one for me

I need you to see how much I need you...


u know you right very big lines and they seems to be a bit forced . plz post your song
with all correct punctuations . well i am srry if i came too harsh on you
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