I wrote this as a middle-breakdown for one of my songs, I just don't know if it sounds quite right...

I can't say your name,
Or see your face,
I wallow in my own disgrace!!
Feel your skin,
Taste your kiss,
there's no deeper Hell than this!!
Blackened sky,
Opened wide.
Feeling like
I have to die!
Asking for a death to send,
Praying for a painless end!
Metal...I wrote hte music as a bone-crushing breakdown in the middle of a softer kinda ballady-metal thing. I work in strange ways, lol